A Well-Done “Change of Address” Email

There ought to be some kind of warning label: Changing your “From” address can be hazardous to your email deliverability.

Do it, and a few things can happen:

But if you have to do it (and sometimes you do), then you should at least do it well.

Example of a Good “Change of Address” Email

A few months ago we showcased a whitelisting request that left a lot to be desired.

I noted at the time that the sender’s “approach to whitelisting [was] bass-ackwards,” but never went into detail about what a better whitelisting request would look like.

Well, courtesy of Dylan at The Email Wars, here’s an example of a well-done one.

Go take a look at the email – my thoughts below will make more sense once you do.

3 Things To Like About (And Learn From) This Email

  1. The Subject Line

    Ever had a friend change his/her email address and then email you to let you know? What subject line did s/he use?

    I bet it was something like “My New Email Address,” right?

    Well, that’s what Marriott did. Short, simple, just like a personal contact would. Brilliant.

  2. Clear Messaging

    It’s hard to mistake what this email is about.

    Even if you have images off and don’t see the big graphic at the top, the first sentence of the email, and the judicious bolding of text (especially the “Before you close this email, please follow these 2 steps” line)

  3. The From Address

    They sent this request from their old/existing “from” address, instead of changing the address first and then asking.

    If that seems like common sense, well… it is.

    But you’d be surprised at how many people change their address, then send an email out from the new address, before you’ve added it to your address book telling you that if you don’t add the new address, you won’t get their email (do you see the irony here?).

Anyway, those are my thoughts on this “change of address” email, but I won’t steal Dylan’s thunder – go see the email and check out his thoughts!

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4 Comments

  1. Thanks guys for the props. I will try to continue to give you good things to share with your clients and readers.

    10/27/2008 10:36 pm
  2. Justin,

    Yes, I do see the irony in your example. The reader would only receive the email in their inbox if they had already added the new email address to their safe addresses list. Since this is not the case here, the request to add the new email address would most likely not even be read.

    Thanks for providing a good post from which to learn.

    1/25/2009 7:56 am
  3. Ann

    Just wanted you to know- I found this post very helpful and then had to stagger all over the ‘net looking for the Marriott change of email announcement. So if anyone else needs it, it’s here now: http://eroi.com/good-example-of-the-address-change/

    12/28/2012 11:51 am
  4. JoJo Zep

    Just wanted to comment regarding the Subject Line. I don’t think that a simple ‘My New Email Address’ is good enough these days it can easily be seen as spam so would suggest actually putting your name in the subject eg. ‘Joe Smith – My New Email Address’. This way Joe Smith will be recognizable to the persons and actually see what Joe Smith is saying.

    10/15/2013 4:18 am

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